Sunday, March 2, 2008

Blog 11- Those silly kids (Naval officer)

I was walking on the beach; on this island we had seen some smoke. I wonder who's here. As I looked up and saw the trees burning, I visualized adults maybe trying to kill a mountain lion or something. I had also heard some ululation... Of course I was wrong and as I came back from my imagination I saw a young boy heave himself out of the forest and onto the sand. He saw me and we talked. Soon after, when other boys came out, he told me that he was leader. When I asked how many boys there were on the island he said he didn't know. I was surprised and asked if there had been and deaths. I was expecting an answer of "None sir," But I was wrong again, the boy who I now knew as Ralph said "two,"
I was very appalled. Ralph started to cower and I knew it was no use trying to get information now. Though I wish he would have elaborated more on his experience on the island. I could learn more later, on the way home. Those silly kids.....

1 comment:

Leyla said...

GOOD JOB! I can see you put alot of work into all your blogs and you also use the correct wording. But...

"I was very appalled. Ralph started to cower and I knew it was no use trying to get information now."

I dont this the naval officer knew about Ralphs name yet. Also try and add more about the after affects of the officer arriving, did they all get off the island? Good job other then that!

:)
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-leyla