"Eric?"
"Yeah Sam?"
"Remember how-"
"-this started? Yes I do,"
"All because Jack-"
"-Stole Piggy's glasses,"
"and then-"
"- We had no signal fire,"
"That was no-"
"-Fun,"
"Yeah,"
"Why did we-"
"-have to go to-"
"-castle rock to get-"
"-Piggy's glasses back,"
" I don't know,"
"Maybe we should have dressed up-"
"-to look professional,"
"If we did maybe-"
"-Ralph and Jack wouldn't of-"
"-Fought,"
" Nomatter what though-"
"-Piggy would of-"
"-Tried to get his-"
"-glasses back,"
"And if he didn't-"
"-he might not be-"
"-dead,"
"Yeah,"
"Jack is a very-"
"-mean boy and so is-"
"-Roger!"
" They made us-"
"join their tribe, I know. I -"
"-hate myself for-"
"-joining,"
"Yeah, I hope-"
"-Ralph is-"
"-Alright, me too,"
"Maybe they won't-"
"-find him, they-"
"-will, I know,"
We stood there standing guard on the tower-like thing while everyone else feasted, then we heard some one whispering our names.
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2 comments:
First of all,
HOW HARD WS THIS TO WRITE????????????
Next, Its one of your best blogs. They way they cut ach other off is perfcet. but maybe allow them to finish one of these sentences by thm selves. I think you could subit this to who ever is incharge of LOTF and let them add it to the book.
-leyla
So i liked your conversation that they all had and my favorite part was
They made us-"
"join their tribe, I know. I -"
Because it was so true about samneric.
But maybe u could be specific like not just what happened but also maybe details how they were tortured. What did jack do for them to join their tribe?
Other than that very good job!
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