Monday, March 10, 2008
Blog 12- Trial Of Jack Merridew (Jury Essay)
Sunday, March 9, 2008
Blog 14- revision of "Blog 10- Which one?
"Yeah Sam?"
"Remember how-"
"-this started? Yes I do,"
"All because Jack-"
"-Stole Piggy's glasses,"
"and then-"
"- We had no signal fire,"
"That was no-""-Fun,"
"Yeah,""Why did we-"
"-have to go to-"
"-castle rock to get-"
"-Piggy's glasses back,"
" I don't know,"
"Maybe we should have dressed up to look professional,"
"If we did maybe-"
"-Ralph and Jack wouldn't of fought,"
" Nomatter what though-"
"-Piggy would of-"
"-Tried to get his-"
"-glasses back,"
"And if he didn't-"
"-he might not be-"
"-dead,"
"Yeah,"
"Jack is a very-"
"-mean boy and so is-"
"-Roger!"
" They made us-"
"join their tribe, I know. I -"
"-hate myself for-"
"-joining,"
"The inly thing that made us-"
"-join was-"
"- the torture-"
"- the beatings were so-"
"-harsh, yes they were,"
"Yeah, I hope-"
"-Ralph is-"
"-Alright, me too,"
"Maybe they won't-"
"-find him, they-"
"-will, I know,"
We stood there standing guard on the tower-like thing while everyone else feasted, then we heard some one whispering our names.
Blog 13- Revision of "Blog 11- Those Silly Kids"
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On the ship all the boys seemed to be crying, but they were all happy to be going home. I couldn't imagine this happening to me when I was their age.....
Tuesday, March 4, 2008
Blog 7- The Beast Hunt (Roger)
Sunday, March 2, 2008
Blog quest- The Leaders song
Click to listen to the song
The leaders
Ralph he is our leader
Tries to get us rescued
But Jack won’t let him
Help our tribe out
Ralph he is our leader
Keeps the fire burning
When it goes out
We all scream and shout
Ralph he is our leader
He is our king
Jack tries to steal that
From him all the time
Jack he is our leader
He stole it from Ralph
Likes to hunt pigs
We all eat meat now
Who will rule the island
When will we be rescued
Will the beast - come
get me or not
Blog 11- Those silly kids (Naval officer)
I was very appalled. Ralph started to cower and I knew it was no use trying to get information now. Though I wish he would have elaborated more on his experience on the island. I could learn more later, on the way home. Those silly kids.....
Blog 10- Which one? (Sam n' Eric)
"Yeah Sam?"
"Remember how-"
"-this started? Yes I do,"
"All because Jack-"
"-Stole Piggy's glasses,"
"and then-"
"- We had no signal fire,"
"That was no-"
"-Fun,"
"Yeah,"
"Why did we-"
"-have to go to-"
"-castle rock to get-"
"-Piggy's glasses back,"
" I don't know,"
"Maybe we should have dressed up-"
"-to look professional,"
"If we did maybe-"
"-Ralph and Jack wouldn't of-"
"-Fought,"
" Nomatter what though-"
"-Piggy would of-"
"-Tried to get his-"
"-glasses back,"
"And if he didn't-"
"-he might not be-"
"-dead,"
"Yeah,"
"Jack is a very-"
"-mean boy and so is-"
"-Roger!"
" They made us-"
"join their tribe, I know. I -"
"-hate myself for-"
"-joining,"
"Yeah, I hope-"
"-Ralph is-"
"-Alright, me too,"
"Maybe they won't-"
"-find him, they-"
"-will, I know,"
We stood there standing guard on the tower-like thing while everyone else feasted, then we heard some one whispering our names.
Wednesday, February 27, 2008
Blog 9-The Fight(Piggy)
Everything is falling apart, my specs are gone and I can’t see. Simon is uh….I Shuddered. Jack has taken my specs I wont be able to see now. I wish Jack would of never been on this island. I wish my auntie was here. I wish so many things. Maybe we could build a boat or send a letter to my aunite. I got up and walked away from where I was. I wasn’t sure where I was going because I couldn’t see, but I was going there. I felt my way to a plam and sat down in the shade. I sat there listening to nature for about an hour, Then Ralph came up,
“You alright Piggy?”
“Yeah I’m alright. They took my specs though,”
“I know. Jack took them, I tried to fight ‘em off, but…”
Ralph just trailed off,
“Want some fruit?” he gesticulated. I could barly make out the movements, but I did.
“Sure,” I said.
Ralph handed me a piece of fruit and left. I smothered myself as I ate it 'cause I was so hungry. So I went to find Ralph, maybe he had more fruit.
"Ralph is that you?"
"Yeah," I sat down and started to talk, " Ralph you know what happened and I need to say that it was......" I paused for a moment, then regained my words, " It was MURDER!" I couldn't believe I said that, but I did.
Tuesday, February 26, 2008
Blog 8- The Feast (Simon)
"Your a silly little boy. An ignorant, silly little boy. Well then, you'd better run off and play with the others. They think you're batty. You don't want Ralph to think you're batty, do you? And Piggy, and Jack? What are you doing out here all alone? Aren't you afraid of me? There isn't anyone to help you. Only me. And I'm the Beast." I was beginning to get nervous. I was trembling too. The Lord of the flies continued,
"You knew, didn't you? I'm part of you? Close, close, close! I'm the reason why it's no go? Why things are what they are? Come now, get back to the others and we'll forget the whole thing," My head wobbled and my eyes were half closed almost as though I was imitating The Lord of the Flies. "This is ridiculous. You Know perfectly well you'll only meet me down there-so don't try to escape!" My body was arched and very stiff. The Lord of the Flies I realized sounded alot like a schoolmaster. He continued again,
"This has gone far enough. My poor misguided child, do you think you know better than I do?" The lord paused and then continued some more,
"I'm warning you. I'm going to get angry. D'you see? You're not wanted. Understand? We are going to have fun on this island! so don't try it on, my poor misguided boy, or else-" Suddenly I was looking into the mouth of the pig head.
"-Or else, we shall do you? See? Jack and Roger and Maurice and Robert and Bill and Piggy and Ralph. Do you. See?" I fell into the mouth and became unconscious
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Later I woke up and started to walk through the forest. The creepers were so thick you would almost think it was a wall. I was thinking about all the corruption that had happened on the island. My gaze was steadfast on one point, the light that came from a fire. I thought that they must have moved camp and started a fire there. So I started to head toward the fire. Then I decided I should go up to the mountain and see if the beast was real. When I got up there I saw something moving with the wind, up and back down. Almost as of it was bowing. I came closer and I saw that it was a dead parachutist and his parachute was pulling him like a puppet. So I untangled him from the rocks. After that the smell hit me and I threw up till my stomach was empty. Then I headed down to camp or what I thought was camp.
I heard a chant and saw everyone dancing around. They seemed like they were attacking something or pretending to. So I started to come out but I fell and had to crawl out in a sort of demented way. I heard screaming and they were saying something about the beast. I just tried to yell and tell everyone about the parachutist. Then everyone gathered around me and I was being beat up, ripped at, clawed. They became the beast. At least it felt like that. The blood started to trickle down my face. After that everything was a blur and soon I was knocked out and then the worst happened, I got to see my own body being left on the beach with the blood slowly coming out. At least I would be in nature and now I wont have to put up with the world anymore.
Sunday, February 10, 2008
Blog 5- The Dream
Tuesday, February 5, 2008
Blog 4-The Ship! (Ralph)
I just layed there under a palm. I was thinking of being rescued and if I was a good leader. No wonder adults are always stressed, and always say you'll be able to handle it when your older. Finally I understand, when I get home I will do anything my parents need me to. I whimpered alittle bit and one small tear fell down my cheek. I looked out into the now familiar mirage. This was all so preposterous. We were all acting like fools, childish fools. maybe I wasn't the right person to be chief maybe Jack should be..... I was implying somthing about myself that I didn't like. How could I be saying this? Jack was the one who started the maddness. I am malevolent towards Jack, he has no right of being this way. I am still chief.... Right? This is irrelevent, What am I saying Jack could never be chief. I looked up and out into the horizon. Could it be?!?! Yes it is! I jumped up shouting "A ship! A ship!" I could not belive my eyes, but there it was a small line of smoke drifting up into the sky. Suddenly I had to aske Simon "Is the fire going?" We all knew the dreadful truth, I ran as fast as I could toward the fire. It was out, nobody was watching it, and The ship was gone. I stood there, In shame. If I could not even get kids to stay and watch a fire what good am I for chief. Out of no where I heard "kill the pig.cut her throat. spill her blood." It was a chant, Jack was leading the group and Sam n' Eric were holding the pig on a spear. When They came up to me I looked into the pigs eyes, They where an opalenscent color. I only had one thing to say to Jack.... "You let the fire go out," Jack just laughed it off and said
"We can start a new one,"
"There was a ship," Jack didn't seem to care he just went on ranting about how they closed in on the pig and when the spears hit her there was a shrill noise. He said to close in on her they moved in a gyration. I was incredulously, who would kill a pig then find out a ship was near and not even care. Jack is so childish and needs to start acting his age.
Monday, February 4, 2008
Blog 3- Pigs, huts, and people(Jack)
Tuesday, January 29, 2008
Blog 2- The Fire(Piggy)
Thursday, January 24, 2008
Blog 1- The first day
When I woke up from the fall, I was caught in a tree, it seemed like a grate was over me.. I carefully clambered down and looked around for the other kids. I sat down and pondered the bright sun was blocked by the giant palms. I started to think "Where is everyone? Are they okay? Is anyone else alive?" My thoughts were interrupted by clamor. It sounded like a horn. I ran toward it, but was stopped by my hunger. I quickly found a mango and devoured it. Then I started to run again. I heard the noise again and quivered at the thought of what it could be. I kept going though, hoping it to be the other kids. When the blasts became louder i slowed down, seeing a giant lagoon before me. I walked toward to kids talking and interposed because I saw a stand. It wasn't really a stand, but a platform. I approached the platform and the strident sound became louder. As I came up to the platform I saw a jumble of kids sitting down below another boy with a shell in his lap. He seemed decorous. We all sat watching the boy, who now I know is Ralph. After everyone came or what we thought was everyone, Ralph stopped blowing the shell. Soon another group of boys appeared one was very vain. They all wore cloaks. Then one of the boys became pallor and started to quiver, after that he fainted. We all talked and decided that we needed a chief. We all speculated about this for awhile. It was a tie between Jack the leader of the cloaked boys and Ralph. We took a vote and Ralph won. Jack looked he had indignation. I voted for Ralph because he seemed like a strong leader that would make all the right choices. After Ralph was elected, Ralph said that jack could be the leader of the cloaked boys. they would be the "hunters." Then they set out on a expedition to explore the island. I was scared and happy. I didn't know what to feel, I mostly just missed my mom and dad....